Friday, August 25, 2017

Marae trp

First we had to drive. Ones we got to the marae we pray sing bey the gate. Then we were allowed to go in.Then we went in the marae. A giea was doing something in the conare but I didn't really see him. We all had to go toilet before we eut lunch. There were cake pies sosgrole and fruit. We had to have one of them. Then the man walk to the front with the year 1-4 after that we had lunch from are lunch box then we had to get ready to go but the year 5-8 gote to stay for the night we had to go to school then we went home.





Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Watching Movies

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing.    

Lunch is boring so I want to watch a movie.                                    

To start   I want to watch a movie because  they make people laugh.                                                    
Next,  I want to watch another movie because they have exciting things in them.                                                                                                                  

Finally, I think that we should watch a movie because people get tired.                                                                                                  
At lunchtime I will watch a movie all the time. Because lunch is a bit bored. And I get  tired.