Wednesday, July 25, 2018

My Amazing Descriptive Writing

My amazing descriptive writing


I rise upside down on stage in front of loads and loads of people.
I smell popcorn as I rise high in the air. My heart  beats swift I
might fall down. Then I hit the ground then boom I came 1st.
Yay. Then all of a sudden the crowd goes wild. And I bow. I can
see my mum and dad and I wave. then I go off stage I was
prowed of my self.

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3 comments:

  1. Great job johanna i like the bit were you but I smell popcorn

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  2. Thank you jordyn I do like popcorn.(:

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