Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, February 22, 2019

Homework should not be banned

Johanna
20/2/19

I don’t want homework to be banned because you learn  more
and some people love to do homework. Please don't ban
homework its cool and fun see I like it and some people don’t
you just have to do it. It doesn't matter  


Sometimes people copy other people and they get in trouble
and then their mum or dad tells the teacher and then they get
in big trouble and then they go to the principal. You don't want
that to happen.


Homework is cool but sometimes it can be frustrating but you
just do it. Your mum or dad would be angry if you didn't do it .
It's good to do homework at home because your learning stuff
without the teacher. If you don’t have a homework book ask a
teacher for one because you need to learn in the holidays or
the weekend.


When it’s coming to the end of the year you still do your
homework also there is a thing called the summer learning
challenge. The summer learning challenge is something to do
in the holidays. You learn a lot’s it’s fun and good to do.
Here’s a photo of it.  
Image result for summer learning journey

I done the summer learning challenge twice it was really fun as
it is a bit like homework but it isn't. So I'm going to do the 2019
to 2020 I hope it's not really hard and I hope it's going to be on


You have to do lots of work to learn you will figure out the stuff
a bit easier but when you go to highschool it changes it gets a
bit harder.  Because your older and your already know some
things so you have to have it harder you will still learn.


You then go to university and you do some work there lots
of work. But there hard so it's going to be tafe and really hard.


So you already know some stuff but there is still more to
learn when your a adout. There will be lots like in farming,
computer work and all that stuff you will get tort how to do it it
could be hard or easy.

Wednesday, February 20, 2019

Scooter, skateboards, ripsticks and bikes should not be banned on School grounds


I don't want the Scooters skateboards…. to be banned on school grounds. It's fun for kids because you can ride on them and do some awesome tricks. You won’t be able to go around the playground with your Scooters skateboards….. But don’t go over other games. Remember to put your safety gear on like helmets and be careful when you do tricks because you can hurt yourself. Some schools can’t have Scooters, skateboards…..  Because kids have been hurt. Also you have to look out of the way. 

Friday, November 30, 2018

The moment I splashed in the water

While I was on the paddle board I jumped off.  The water felt shallow. It was cold and warm too.  I could see that I was floating in the water. I got to have a go on the paddle board myself. It was so much fun that I want to go again next time I go to Westport. Rylee and I wanted to have a go at the back of the paddle board so that we could be dragged around the water.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018

My Amazing Descriptive Writing

My amazing descriptive writing


I rise upside down on stage in front of loads and loads of people.
I smell popcorn as I rise high in the air. My heart  beats swift I
might fall down. Then I hit the ground then boom I came 1st.
Yay. Then all of a sudden the crowd goes wild. And I bow. I can
see my mum and dad and I wave. then I go off stage I was
prowed of my self.

Image result for gymnastic


Wednesday, June 27, 2018

Challenges with living on Mars

Return Ticket please SJ 2.1.00


Work in pairs or individually to find information in the text and organise it into a table.  (First one has
been done for you.)


WALT identify the Challenges with living on Mars.

Need
Challenge
Oxygen
Not enough on Mars so people could not breathe the air
water
There is not a enough water
live
There is no live
Meteorites
Drifted through space and ended up on earth

Tuesday, June 5, 2018

Mars

Mars is in our solar system. It is 6780 km in diameter which is half the size of Earth.  This makes it the second smallest planet in our Solar System. Mars is 227.8 million km from the sun.  It is the fourth planet from the sun. it is the last inner planet. It takes 687 days for mars to orbit the sun.

Mars looks different than other planets. On  Mars there are two moons called Phobos and Deimos. Mars has a volcano called Olympus which is 27 km in height and is 3 times taller than Mount Everest. Mars is called the red planet because the color of mars is blood red.
ars is made out of rock iron and dust.
Mars history goes back a long way. It is named after the roman god of war. An Italian astronomer called Galileo was the first person to see Mars with a telescope. It can be seen in the night sky without the use of a telescope. Mariner 9 got launched on to mars in may 30 1971.



We were learning  put topic sentences in our writing and to describe how Mars if different to other planets.   







Wednesday, May 17, 2017

Watching Movies

We have been learning how to structure a piece of persuasive writing.  We learnt about stating our position in the introduction, putting our three reasons in the main part of our writing and then summing it up in the conclusion.

Here is my first attempt at a piece of persuasive writing.    

Movies
                     
Lunch is boring so I want to watch a movie.                                    

To start   I want to watch a movie because  they make people laugh.                                                    
Next,  I want to watch another movie because they have exciting things in them.                                                                                                                  

Finally, I think that we should watch a movie because people get tired.                                                                                                  
At lunchtime I will watch a movie all the time. Because lunch is a bit bored. And I get  tired.